Dissociate
Pick you up in a truck
Flatbed covered
Shhh...
don’t tell her about the surprise
Quantum
I never imagine us
doing much talking
Star struck
Awe
Mirror connection
Laugh
Kiss
Galactic boom
Lips slightly open
tongues eager to connect
I wanna know your boundaries
Which parts
Do Not cross
Call the names of every planet
Where we going first?
Venus
I’ll take you there
No patience
Let’s take my
Rocket ship
lips hovering
barely touching
drawn by instinct
Our bodies dance
Vertical to the horizon
Outlive scars
Trace your palm
No drugs
Just us
Ice walls
thaw
Yeah, I like that
Watch your thoughts
F l y
Grab em from the sky
Pull you closer
Next to me
Listen
Skipping a breath
Jump
Take you to a private island
Luminescent night
Wash up at our feet
Make a wish
Snap
Jealous
how the ocean
Carries you
I want that to be me
Swim out
Brace for impact
Let me take you back
3am
The only time it was you and I
No questions
I didn’t know back then
It would be our last
Heart set in stone
Crescent moon
Laid up like it’s a hammock
The more I think about it
Eye lids heavy
I understand better now
Love has been an escape
Your face
Only a story


you did such a great job with the structure of this, it matches the content of the poem so beautifully.
i felt very surrounded and immersed in the story
i love this <3